this goes for the people who write up about 1, 2, 3 lines of Rping. heres a few tips for you guys, because it kinda damages the feel for Rping, i'll put my tips in numerical order)
#1 : Describe your jutsu attacks
EX : (this is another one of my characters) Olan looked up toward his clone and saw him flying in with a katana held in his hands, Olan Leaped back barely avoiding the attack, while leaping back he created a few hand signs and inhaled a great amount of air, the chakra inside of him and almost fused with air preparing to exhale, Olan then made a small hole with his mouth, and he then exhaled creating a giant fire in front of him, the fire formed into a fireball and aimed right at his clone.
(ok you dont have to like make it that detail, but at leat a little)
#2 : Dont just say your using the attack
(i saw this, srry for using your post but im just making a point)
[quote]Tobi made clones jump onto neji while he went up to neji and used tsukimiyo[b]
you can put more detail like this
Tobi created the shadow hand sign and smoke puffed around him, a dozen clones of him suddenly appeared, giving a solid look to them, the clones attack Neji from every direction, The origional tobi Jumped high into the air, hovering over neji and his clones, he then creates a few handsigns and aims Tsukimiyo right at Neji
(it helps a lot making the post bigger)
#3 : No Double-Posting
(they know who they are, and the dude whose playing rock lee, dont double post to put your actions and speeches on different posts, just like make a space between them)
i will add more to this, im not being mean, i just love watching people post well, it helps the love for Rping)
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Sat Sep 22, 2007 10:47 am